Each week, Good Weekend’s how-to column shares expert advice on how to navigate some of modern life’s big – and small – challenges.
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Many years ago, I began writing 100-word short stories.
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Writers of haiku – who, like me, attempt to capture moments – might wonder why I’ve needed to be so damned long-winded.
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A Japanese poetic form, haiku, in English, are measured in syllables, not words.
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But the popular perception that a haiku must always consist of three lines of five, seven and five syllables is a misconception.
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“Traditional Japanese haiku featured five, seven, five sound units, or morae, but these are very different to English syllables,” explains Grant Caldwell, a poet, novelist and honorary senior fellow at Melbourne University.
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Caldwell loves the accessibility of haiku and its defining brevity, which suits our time-poor world and blowfly-like attention spans, but strict adherence to the “5-7-5” structure – which he says has long been discarded in Japan – rattles his bamboo, so to speak.
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“The problem is that writers focus more on that instead of the principles and the spirit of haiku.”
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One essential principle of haiku, says Caldwell, is the use of everyday language.
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Another is that they should attend to, explicitly or implicitly, the “two basic notions of existence: the never-changing [such as the sun, sky, sea or seasons] and the ever-changing [anything that points to the ephemeral nature of existence].”
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Caldwell likens the process of writing a haiku to that of taking a photograph or making a sketch.
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But a haiku, he says, “has the advantage of engaging a fuller range of a reader’s senses, such as sound, even indirectly”.
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Hear the joyous racket, for example, in an 1890 haiku by Japanese poet Masaoka Shiki: In the abandoned boat/The hail/Bounces about.
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The first step is to pay attention to what’s around you, to what strikes you, and make a note of it in simple language: “One or two sentences at most,” Caldwell says.
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“You can incorporate sound, dialogue, touch, smell, thoughts.
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As such, adverbs and adjectives, along with clichés, direct metaphors and similes, can go.
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“Don’t worry if it doesn’t seem to be great literature,” he says, suggesting the journey is more important than the destination.
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“Many of the problems people have are because we’re not focused on what we’re doing.
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Writing haiku concentrates our attention in the now.”
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Paul Connolly writes the regular Kitchen Sink Drama column for Good Weekend magazine.
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