Many years ago I began writing 100-word short stories. Some would argue that’s too long

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Connolly, P. (2026, October 16). Many years ago I began writing 100-word short stories. Some would argue that’s too long. The Sydney Morning Herald. https://www.smh.com.au/national/many-years-ago-i-began-writing-100-word-short-stories-some-would-argue-that-s-too-long-20261017-p61266.html?ref=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_source=rss_feed

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The Sydney Morning Herald · collected 2026-10-16 · by Paul Connolly

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The article discusses how to write a haiku, a Japanese poetic form, emphasizing its principles over rigid structure. Grant Caldwell, an expert in poetry and literature, explains that traditional haikus follow sound units rather than English syllables, debunking the common misconception about their strict 5-7-5 format. He highlights the importance of using everyday language and capturing both permanent and transient elements of existence to convey a deeper sense of reality through concise expression.
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Grant Caldwell, a poet and honorary senior fellow at Melbourne University, recently discussed the misconceptions surrounding haiku poetry in an article for *Good Weekend*. Contrary to popular belief, traditional Japanese haiku do not strictly adhere to a 5-7-5 syllable structure; instead, they use sound units called morae. Caldwell argues that this rigid format has been abandoned in Japan but persists in English-language interpretations due to a misunderstanding of the poetic form's principles and spirit. He emphasizes that haiku should focus on capturing fleeting moments and natural imagery rather than conforming to a specific syllable count. This discussion challenges the widely held notion about how haiku should be written, suggesting a more flexible approach aligned with modern writing practices.

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🔮 Writers of haiku – who, like me, attempt to capture moments – might wonder why I’ve needed to be so damned long-winded.
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Caldwell loves the accessibility of haiku and its defining brevity, which suits our time-poor world and blowfly-like attention spans, but strict adherence to the “5-7-5” structure – which he says has long been discarded in Japan – rattles his bamboo, so to speak.
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🔮 Writers of haiku – who, like me, attempt to capture moments – might wonder why I’ve needed to be so damned long-winded.
2026-10-16 · The Sydney Morning Herald
Many years ago I began writing 100-word short stories. Some would argue that’s too long · assertive framing

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Each week, Good Weekend’s how-to column shares expert advice on how to navigate some of modern life’s big – and small – challenges. asserted
column → share → challenges
Many years ago, I began writing 100-word short stories. asserted
I → write → stories
Writers of haiku – who, like me, attempt to capture moments – might wonder why I’ve needed to be so damned long-winded. uncertain
I → attempt → moments
A Japanese poetic form, haiku, in English, are measured in syllables, not words. asserted
form → measure → syllables
But the popular perception that a haiku must always consist of three lines of five, seven and five syllables is a misconception. asserted
haiku → consist → syllables
“Traditional Japanese haiku featured five, seven, five sound units, or morae, but these are very different to English syllables,” explains Grant Caldwell, a poet, novelist and honorary senior fellow at Melbourne University. asserted
Caldwell → feature → University
Caldwell loves the accessibility of haiku and its defining brevity, which suits our time-poor world and blowfly-like attention spans, but strict adherence to the “5-7-5” structure – which he says has long been discarded in Japan – rattles his bamboo, so to speak. asserted
he → love → bamboo
“The problem is that writers focus more on that instead of the principles and the spirit of haiku.” asserted
writers → focus → haiku
One essential principle of haiku, says Caldwell, is the use of everyday language. asserted
Caldwell → say → language
Another is that they should attend to, explicitly or implicitly, the “two basic notions of existence: the never-changing [such as the sun, sky, sea or seasons] and the ever-changing [anything that points to the ephemeral nature of existence].” asserted
that → attend → existence
Caldwell likens the process of writing a haiku to that of taking a photograph or making a sketch. asserted
Caldwell → liken → sketch
But a haiku, he says, “has the advantage of engaging a fuller range of a reader’s senses, such as sound, even indirectly”. asserted
he → say → sound
Hear the joyous racket, for example, in an 1890 haiku by Japanese poet Masaoka Shiki: In the abandoned boat/The hail/Bounces about. asserted
hail → hear → Bounces
The first step is to pay attention to what’s around you, to what strikes you, and make a note of it in simple language: “One or two sentences at most,” Caldwell says. asserted
Caldwell → pay → language
“You can incorporate sound, dialogue, touch, smell, thoughts. asserted
You → incorporate → thoughts
As such, adverbs and adjectives, along with clichés, direct metaphors and similes, can go. asserted
adverbs → go → clichés
“Don’t worry if it doesn’t seem to be great literature,” he says, suggesting the journey is more important than the destination. asserted
journey → worry → destination
“Many of the problems people have are because we’re not focused on what we’re doing. asserted
we → have → what
Writing haiku concentrates our attention in the now.” asserted
Writing → write → now
Paul Connolly writes the regular Kitchen Sink Drama column for Good Weekend magazine. asserted
Connolly → write → magazine
Read more from Good Weekend: - Liane Moriarty, the queen of “domestic noir”, revisits her most captivating characters a decade later - asserted
Moriarty → read → characters
From share houses to dinner parties: The 2kg book that became a Gen X rite of passage - ‘Very few people can do what she does’: How Jane Harper became one of the world’s biggest crime authors asserted
Harper → become → authors
Get the best of Good Weekend delivered to your inbox every Saturday morning. asserted
best → get → inbox
Continue this edition The October 17 editionUp next Previously The national broadcaster’s first national disability affairs reporter on how parents and children react to her blindness. asserted
parents → continue → blindness
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